Thanks for the feedback Phil I've cut the sequence so the camera rotation happens sooner. In terms of your other pointers -
I will work on finishing the jump sequence however there isn't too much room left for him to run seeing as I modelled only what the camera could see. There may be room for two strides in shot but that's it.
After I've done this I will hopefully have time to do a running sequence...(The renders in the icey cavern scene took roughly 4-5 hours to render so hopefully I have the time to get it done for rendering and testing on the televisions)
Anyways back to the final push! Onwards!